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ഭയക്കരുത്‌ കടലു കാണുമ്പോള്‍
മിഴിയടക്കരുത്‌, നീല-
ക്കുടവയറു ചുറ്റുമരഞ്ഞാണ വള്ളിയില്‍
സൂര്യനേത്രം കൊരുത്തു കാണുമ്പോള്‍.
ശൂന്യസ്ഥൂലത നീലച്ച കുഴിയന്‍
വാനപാത്രത്താലടച്ച ദിക്കിലെ
രൌദ്രദുരൂഹത തിരയനക്കുമ്പോള്‍.
നിന്നിലെ മുക്കാല്‍ പങ്കാണ്‌
മുന്നിലെ കടലായ്‌ കിടപ്പത്‌.....
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കാല്‍ വലിക്കരുത്‌
തീരത്തെ കയറിപ്പിടിക്കും തിര-
ക്കൈത്തണുപ്പു കാല്‍തൊടുമ്പോള്‍.
ആഴിക്കുഴിയുടെയാഴങ്ങള്‍ നിന്‍
കാല്‍ നക്കി തിരിച്ചൂളിയിടുമ്പോള്‍.
മേലൊഴുക്കിനടിയിലെ മൌന-
ഭാരം നിന്‍ ചെകിടത്തടിച്ചാലും.
ആഴവും മൌനവും കൂടിയാ-
ണാദിഭ്രൂണമഹാത്ഭുതത്തിന്‍
അമ്ലമിശ്രിതമാദ്യമുണ്ടാക്കിയത്‌.....

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നെഞ്ചു പൊത്തിപ്പിടിക്കരുത്‌
ഉപ്പലിഞ്ഞ കാറ്റിന്നീറനില്‍ നിന്‍
കൃത്രിമക്കുഴല്‍ വാല്‍വിലെ
ലോഹം തുരുമ്പിച്ചുവെന്നാല്‍.
വേലിയേറ്റ, മിറക്കപ്പെടാപ്പാടുകള്‍
ആഞ്ഞടിക്കും ഞരമ്പിലൂ-
ടുപ്പിറിങ്ങി ഘനീഭവിച്ചെന്നാല്‍.
കാലത്തിന്‍ വിയര്‍പ്പിലെയുപ്പ്‌
ഭൂമിക്കു വളമായതാണ്‌....

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ആഴിക്കും മേഘത്തിനുമിടയില്‍
ആഴങ്ങളെ നിറച്ചൊരു തുള്ളി
സ്വല്‍പനേരമെന്‍ കടല്‍പേടിക്ക്‌
സാരോപദേശത്തകിടു ജപിച്ച്‌
"ക്ലിമ്‌ !!" മുങ്ങാങ്കുഴിയിടുന്നു.
കടലിലേക്ക്‌....
ആഴത്തിലേക്ക്‌....
അനന്തതയിലേക്ക്‌.....

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Submitted by Raveesh (not verified) on Mon, 2006-05-08 09:44.

Enthu poem sir. Vayanakkare ingane vellam kudippikaruthu. Onnum manasil avatha kavitha ezhuthy pavam readersine sahithyathil ninnu akdatharuthu...It is a request

Submitted by Kaviam (not verified) on Mon, 2006-05-08 16:48.

Yes. I agree with you.

But sometimes mathur shows the signs of +ve writing. Its relieving that still he is totally not moved to the much hated post modernism as well. may we expect more good and understandable deliverables from him...
rhythm and understandability makes him a bit different.

perhaps this piece contains some outlook to universe. some new expressions can be seen at part 1 & 3.

Submitted by Sree Padanilam (not verified) on Mon, 2006-05-08 21:02.

dear

read it. say nice. universal truths are again and again emphasised. feel of vast ocean is there in your first stanza. not a less work, but to improve. an inclination to nature and its myseries are uncovering.

avoid more detailing on one subject in one side.
vishaya prabhu was much more penetrating. comeout with more strong works.

sree padanilam.

Submitted by Kaviam (not verified) on Tue, 2006-05-09 18:12.

dears

be self respecting first. love and worship own language. dedicate for its cause. Its not the good sign of insulting your language by addressing it as "Uncivilized!!!!" . JAYESH needs maturity and seriousness to Malayalam. Respect for malayalam. Write everything in Manglish, and perhaps I doubt whether you know all the alphabets in Malayalam. Whether you know the Malayalam culture and deep routes. Simply calling Language and the People as "Uncivilised shaows " the dangerous signs of writers, being gone away from people and Linguistic attachment. Do not expect people to come to your expectations, as for people, literature is a gradual and flexible relief and enlightenment. Do not try to force the mass to change thier taste by sticking to your own inabilities.

These many hues and cries are, perhaps coming from the writers only!!! Not from the mass. What it means. Nothing..The poets and writers are in a hurry to lift themselves. The mass is here , only scapegoats. Thats why now literature is becoming a failure.

Come out from the fool's paradise. Realise what is literature, why it originated, how its effective in the present era. Re-think whether literature is for you yourself for publishing or something to contribute to society.

Can you show me a single child/grown up who is not knowing "Naranathu Bhranthan " and its extremely appealing vocal impact??? Is there any Keralite who doesnt know "Panthrandu Makkale Pettoramme..." Stansa??? 101% no!!!!!!!!1

Why? No meaning is there? Lots. "Kavitha" is not there? Full of..!! Then whom you people are making fool that Madhusoodanan's avitha is out of time???

Whom you are trying to make fools?? I read ONV very eagerly. I know his lines by Heart. I am not going to read Vinod's or Sunil's poem by heart and sing it.... Why??? hats the hidden evil in the Post modern trait. Be careful, My Malayalam,.....

your deadbody is awaited by we, called post modern poets and writers. your cremation ground is here, where we are enjoying the bits of tortures being published as poems ....

Be beware f this writers...You are going to be killed and cremated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Submitted by K P aravindan (not verified) on Tue, 2006-05-09 20:56.

Dear Kaviam,
I can show you plenty of people who doesn't know who is madhusoodanan nair. What the hell you are talking about? Go get lost... what is the mass you are talking about? how big is it? do you know the population of kerala? Do you know how big is the circulation of the elite magazines like kala kaumudi/mathrubhoomi/malayalam etc in which people like madhusoodanan nair wrote? And you go and compare that with malayalamanorama/mangalam. Where is your mass coming from? Come on... tell me what is the circulation of kalakaumudi/mathrubhumi? bull shit... u shut up first.

i will give you a simple test. go and read all the 10 issues of manorama magazine. come back and tell us whether you like it or not. it will help you understand where you stand.

plese understand that literature is never read or understood by masses. It is always a small fraction of the society who will understand and appreciate good literature.

Now when these people like madhusoodanan nair started writing/reciting, there were oppositions like this... do you remember any of that? this happens.... .history repeats.. .we have a high inertia to any CHANGE. You take any thing... a malayali will oppose it.. so now you are doing it... but unfortunately you will be thrown away by time.

Submitted by kaviam (not verified) on Tue, 2006-05-09 21:22.

Shouting "Get lost" wont work my friend. Be cool. Sit a while and get some fresh air, cool down the brain , then think what you are speaking. See and evoke some insight. Get lost never worked anywhere than, getting themselves lost. Its time tested.

Just for example, Your name is Aravind. Whats the meaning? The entire sacred flower is spoilt by the same. you dont have any fragrance. No Saraswathy is sitting in you. No creation is brimming in you. Its only name... Such is now these days poem means. In name Poem, and by property, something else.

So have a nice day.
Let these, vinods, mathoors, sunils ans so... reign the supremacy of nose-less world!!!!!!!!

see you

Submitted by Sunil Krishnan (not verified) on Tue, 2006-05-09 23:30.

കാവ്യം, നന്നായി വരേണ്ടിയിരുന്ന സംസാരത്തെ താങ്കള്‍ മലീമസമാക്കി.
ഇനി ഒന്നും താങ്കള്‍ അര്‍ഹിക്കുന്നില്ല.
ഈ ഇടത്തെ ഞാന്‍ ആദരിക്കുന്നു.
നന്ദി.

Submitted by K P aravindan (not verified) on Tue, 2006-05-09 23:35.

Dear,
what are you talking about? why are you deviating from the subject? have you forgot what we are discussing? do you have any answer to my questions... yes, i say aloud: if you dont have answers, please please get lost!!!

Submitted by K P aravindan (not verified) on Tue, 2006-05-09 23:36.

sunilji,
yes, you said it right. he doesn't deserve anything...

Submitted by Ravindran (not verified) on Wed, 2006-05-10 09:54.

Inna ningalude fightinoru kavitha.............

KANUKA NINGAL NAADAN NAYUM
KANNU KOTHIKKUM FOREIGN NAAYUM
THAMMIL THALLI IRIKKEY AKSHARAM-
ELLIN THUNDU PUZHUTHU KIDAPPATHU...

Thammil Thallikkolooooo. Pakshe kazhinja thalamura namukku nalkiyva bhasha kedu koodathe adutha thalamuraye ningal elpikkanam........Ithu oru apeksha aaaanu

Thanks

Submitted by kaviam (not verified) on Wed, 2006-05-10 21:07.

Pollution seems to be made when somebody points out deficiency in you. Sunil doesnt like criticisms. And be a human enough to hear as a human and think as a human. A poet should be extreme human and kind. Your poems are pollutants, say, if I say, you mistake it as pollution. But not thinking in which way its pollutant. instead calling/Challenging for a samvada!!! Rediculous friend. Leave this showbizz, and do not be brittle. A little flexibility will save you from the snticipated literary change and its impact.

So, challenges or diclarations are not going to cover your deficiencies. You have to come up to the meaning of this pollutant dear....

Submitted by Kaviam (not verified) on Wed, 2006-05-10 21:15.

sir,

while respecting this place, show some respect to your fellow-beings also.!!!! Respect should not be restricted to the net space, only because of some influencial aspects, But to the space around you also. Thats more important!!!!!!