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എവിടെയോ കണ്ടിട്ടുണ്ട്
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ഒന്ന് നിന്നേ, നിങ്ങളെ എവിടെയോ കണ്ടിട്ടുണ്ടല്ലോ! ഒന്നോര്ത്ത് നോക്കിയേ ങാ, പിടികിട്ടി ഇപ്പോഴെന്തു ചെയ്യുന്നു? എന്ത്?! അല്ലാ, ഞാനൊന്നോര്ത്തു നോക്കട്ടെ ജയേഷ് |
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ഒന്ന് നിന്നേ, നിങ്ങളെ എവിടെയോ കണ്ടിട്ടുണ്ടല്ലോ! ഒന്നോര്ത്ത് നോക്കിയേ ങാ, പിടികിട്ടി ഇപ്പോഴെന്തു ചെയ്യുന്നു? എന്ത്?! അല്ലാ, ഞാനൊന്നോര്ത്തു നോക്കട്ടെ ജയേഷ് |
Dear Sri Jayesh,
You are quite right Jayesh. Free margin and exchange centers..
A good sign board....... is require to find my blood clottings. After all nothing to loose if it was profitable exchange.
Thanks for the exchange.
Sunil Krishnan
Dear Sunil,
After all we are loosing something.It is the self. Thanks for your valuable comments.
Dear Mr.Jayesh
This is the first poem of you I am reading. I would like to express my opinion on this poem. This is not at all a good work. And the theme also is something like 'painkili katha'. When you select the theme please be sure that it has some art value in it.
So I hope that you will mind this next time.
Thank you
sad to read this comment... this is a poem with a different way of presentation.... probably the reader is not able to accept the new form...
Dear Mr.Jayesh,
Your attempt is good. But it is not up to you to write. Do something else which you know. Don't torture the readers like this.
Thanks,
A.Khader
dear sir,
Thank you for your comments.
priyappetta vaayanakkara,
vivaramillenkil mindaathirikkuka.
Jayesh,
It's true. Sometimes we are forced to forget everything to survive. What happened to the other is not important to us. Thank you for revealing the truth.
Veena